Author : minniie
Title : Rebellious Cinderella
Link : http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/minniie4eva/
Status : On-going
Reviewer : sweetbunn @ RawrOutLoud
Warning : The reviewer has nothing against the author. This is just an honest and strict review which will help the author to improve himself/herself in the next attempt of writing a story. Please do not get angry if there any unpleasant comments.
Title: 4/5
The title isn't interesting but when you read the chapter its so good that really can't stop reading it
Poster/Background: 10/10
the poster and background suites the font you can really read it easily
forewords: 8/10
its wasn't that interesting to read but i hope that you can put the summary so that it will be interesting o read
Plot:10/15
the story is really interesting its not yet done so i will just 10 keep it up
Creativity/Originality: 13/15
hhhhmmmm........I give you 13 cause some of the chapter was like in the cinderella story
Flow:10/10
its really good so keep it up
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/10
theres none so keep it up
Characterisation:10/10
its was really good characters especially BEBU(I'm really a BeBu fan een if guilun is now winning)
Writing Style:10/10
its really good and pretty interesting to read because you updating a really long chapters that what i really would like to read
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
its really entertaining to read
Sub Total: 90/100
Bonus: 5/5
Total: 95/100
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Monday, April 20, 2009
Friday, April 10, 2009
Disturbia by HidayahF
Author : HidayahF
Title : Disturbia
Link : http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Disturbia
Status : On-going
Reviewer : sweetbunn @ RawrOutLoud
Warning : The reviewer has nothing against the author. This is just an honest and strict review which will help the author to improve himself/herself in the next attempt of writing a story. Please do not get angry if there any unpleasant comments.
Title: 2/5
its not related to the story i was really thinking about that
Poster/Background: -/10
there is no background and poster
Forewords: 5/10
the introduction was really intereting but more will be interesting was the synopsis
Plot: 10/15
its still not yet done but its really interesting
Creativity/Originality: 10/15
i always seen the playboy thingy and the acting thingy
Flow: 8/10
its really good
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/10
as far i can see there is none so keep the good work
characterisation: 10/10
its really represent the appearances
Writing Style: 7/10
Overall Enjoynment :3/5
i really enjoy this but i think you should write some pranks or some funny movements
Sub Total :65/100
bonus : 4/5
keep the good work JIA YOU!
Total : 69/100
Title : Disturbia
Link : http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Disturbia
Status : On-going
Reviewer : sweetbunn @ RawrOutLoud
Warning : The reviewer has nothing against the author. This is just an honest and strict review which will help the author to improve himself/herself in the next attempt of writing a story. Please do not get angry if there any unpleasant comments.
Title: 2/5
its not related to the story i was really thinking about that
Poster/Background: -/10
there is no background and poster
Forewords: 5/10
the introduction was really intereting but more will be interesting was the synopsis
Plot: 10/15
its still not yet done but its really interesting
Creativity/Originality: 10/15
i always seen the playboy thingy and the acting thingy
Flow: 8/10
its really good
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/10
as far i can see there is none so keep the good work
characterisation: 10/10
its really represent the appearances
Writing Style: 7/10
Overall Enjoynment :3/5
i really enjoy this but i think you should write some pranks or some funny movements
Sub Total :65/100
bonus : 4/5
keep the good work JIA YOU!
Total : 69/100
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