Author: M&Mkwonღ
Title: Dream On
Link: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/dream_on/
Status: Completed
Reviewer: Imperfection.x3
Title: 4/5
It may be common, but it really fit with the story.
First Impression: 10/10
WOOH~ 10/10!! Its like 2PM over here. I really liked it, it was clean yet mysterious.
Forewords: 7/10
The prolouge was quite nice but i found the rest confusing.
Plot: 13/15
Like I said pretty common, but great minds think alike!
Creativity/Originality: 14/15
I like the quote in the chapter, it matches.
Flow: 6/10
A bit fast, although it was a oneshot. Take time, and let the chapter flow, soft but powerful.
:D
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/10
Dang Girl, Another one?! LOL It's really well said.
Characterisation: 8/10
During the story, I could tell that SoHee was a tough cookie
Writing Style: 10/10
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
HeeDragon~
Sub Total: 87/100
Bonus: 5/5
It captured me.
Total: 92/100
AMAZING!
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