Clown Love by Xiaoxi

Title: Clown Love
Author: Xiaoxi
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/clownlove
Reviewed By: Ronix ^^ @ RawrOutLoud

Title: 4/5
So mysterious, It gives a lot of curiousness and excitement. =]

First Impression: 8/10
Like the poster ! It's cool and it increases their interests in your story if you have an awesome background and poster for it. ^^

Forewords: 10/10
Bravo ! Love the introductions and the "so called" interview. This is really something... =]

Plot: 13/15
It's unique ! It's like a story of a person who always like to smile and laugh on the outside but hides all the misery inside and never reveals it.

Creativity/Originality: 15/15
You are one of a kind, Impressive ! =]

Flow: 8/10
It wasn't too slow it wasn't too fast, Everything was just fine. =]

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 9/10
Maybe you can say that some of your grammar wasn't simplified like, "He is wearing" And it should be, "He's wearing". ^^ But that's okay, since you really didn't have any major errors. Just some shortcuts... =]

Characterization: 10/10
Do you still need to ask me that ?? Please, I enjoyed every little detail ! ^^

Writing Style: 10/10
Like I always say in other reviews, (For other reviewers and of course me ! But not everyone =] ) That whatever writing style you did, The most important thing is, You can understand and visualized it. Cause if you can't even understand the thing you've written and you try to make us understand instead, Then it's useless. ^^

Overall Enjoyment: 4/5
A blast ! Good job by the way... =]

Sub Total: 91/100

Bonus: 4/5

Total: 95/100

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I'm sorry If I'm not your preferred reviewer since yuebo was resigning, So... Thank you for letting me review your story instead. =] And I would like to apologize if I have offended you in any way. ^^ This is to help authors to rise up and improve their talent ! Remember, not everyone can do this...Cause not everyone has incredible imaginations like us. =] Thank You ! Hope You Enjoy The Review ! =]